Gifts of wandering ice

Page 302 - Cry for help

Cry for help

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Brother and sister have a lot more in common than one may think. Here I gave Rita these eyes - with small pupils - that Jan usually has. She is pretty serious about killing him, and, yes, she can be very cruel. Jan doesn't believes her at first, but all his doubts wanish when he looks his sister in the eye. His smirk disappears. He is terrified and does the only thing he can at the moment: he cries for help.

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Jan thinks he's just absolutely invincible and immortal, doesn't he? (At least until the last part of this page...)

Tiny nitpick: I would probably say "You won't do that!" or "You wouldn't do that!"

6th Sep 2018, 6:12 PM edit delete reply

Ah, "this" and "that" again... I cannot clearly understand yet when I need one or the other.
All I see now is that your version sounds better. I'll fix the text, thanks!

7th Sep 2018, 1:55 PM edit delete reply

She could totally just psych him out right now. She owns him completely.

7th Sep 2018, 5:02 AM edit delete reply

And no one would judge her for this.
It must be so very tempting to torture the bastard to death... Will Rita do this, though? Jan believes she will.

7th Sep 2018, 1:57 PM edit delete reply

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