Gifts of wandering ice

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Candlelight

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The cave has little shiny stones in its walls. Once Tim adds more light they all begin twinkling like hundreds of little stars.

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I hate to be a gramatical nitpicker on such an expressive page, but it should probably be "the right thing."

17th Nov 2017, 1:32 AM edit delete reply

Fixed!
Thanks for telling me.

17th Nov 2017, 9:05 AM edit delete reply

and 'the' company. A company is only used for the other meanings of the word - a business, a host

7th Apr 2019, 12:56 PM edit delete reply

Hmm, thanks. I'll do some research about this. I often see phrases like "a company of friends" ans "make me a company", so it seems okay.

7th Apr 2019, 9:12 PM edit delete reply

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